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Grades 7-12 · Instant Feedback
What We Evaluate
- ✓Clarity and Focus
- ✓Argument Strength
- ✓Specificity
- ✓Originality
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Example: What Feedback Looks Like
Student submitted:
In Harper Lee's 'To Kill a Mockingbird,' Scout Finch's childhood innocence is gradually eroded by her exposure to the pervasive racism and injustice in her Southern community. This loss of innocence shapes her understanding of morality and ultimately leads her to question the values she was raised with.
A-Sample grade
Strengths
- Clear and focused argument
- Provides specific examples from the text
To Improve
- Could explore the broader implications of Scout's transformation
- Consider adding a counter-argument to strengthen the thesis
Tips for Better Thesis Statements
- Clearly state the main argument of your essay in one or two sentences.
- Make sure your thesis is arguable and not just a statement of fact.
- Provide specific reasons or evidence to support your thesis.
- Consider the scope of your thesis and ensure it is manageable within the length of your essay.